Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Gratitude, A Remembrance

Linking to Imperfect Prose on Thursdays where Emily says we can submit old or new writings~~
this happens to be something old but a memory I like to recall now and then.

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I rise in the early morning quiet to dress for school.
 Then, turning out the lights, I wait in the dark for the bus to come.

Behind me, I hear the sound of her steps on the stairs.
"Did you get enough to eat?"
"Yes."
"Do you have everything you need?"
Her arms hold me close and her kiss brushes my cheek.

The bus comes in the distance, its headlights bobbing over the bumps on the washboard road~~
the sight of the lights past Hochstetter's house are my signal.
 If I run fast enough, I can meet the bus as Shorty opens the doors, leap the steps,
 and catch my seat before the doors slap shut behind me.

"Run! And have a good day!"
I run, the wind at my back.
The warmth of the house and my mother's tenderness
 blow me like a kiss down the long, dark lane.

Yes, I have everything I need.

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26 comments:

Ruthiey said...

'The bus comes in the distance, its headlights bobbing over the bumps on the washboard road' I love this line.

LauraX said...

so beautiful Becky, my post is a memory today too...I find sometimes that those memories from childhood can give me deep sustenance in my life as an adult now.

ELK said...

i love this ... really touched me!!

mise said...

Very, very nicely put.

Brian Miller said...

smiles. what a beautiful memory to cling to...being content...wish we could always say that...

S. Etole said...

it feels like I'm there watching ...

rosaria said...

What a beautiful image, so tenderly painted here.

Leslie said...

I always love your rembrances. You paint them so real... and I love this:

"The warmth of the house and my mother's tenderness
blow me like a kiss down the long, dark lane."

I'll bet you did the same thing with your own kids...

Elaine said...

Beautiful.

Kati patrianoceu said...

This just exudes everything that is good about childhood, especially trust and excitement!

patty said...

so very beautiful... and what a beautiful childhood, i imagine.
visiting from emily's...

Joybird said...

This brought me right back to kindergarten, just my mom and I eating oatmeal in the dark before school. A very tender memory, thanks.

Mara - Home Shabby Home said...

Just love it Becky, have a good day!
Mara

Dimple said...

The warmth and security of home fill these lines.

Mama Zen said...

I hope that my daughter will have memories like that.

alittlebitograce said...

This brought a smile to my face, especially the just-right timing of that early morning dash.

emily wierenga said...

oh wow. i'm crying again. there is such tenderness in this post... your mother is so alive, so vivid, and her love so tangible. well done, dear becky.

Suzy Q said...

I love the imagery you use.
Very nostalgic. Beautiful. Poignant.

Brandee Shafer said...

Don't you just wish, sometimes, that you could go back? Nicely written. The washboard line is my favorite!

Linda@ Lime in the Coconut said...

Sweet, sweet mama memories...LOVE!

B. Meandering said...

Such a beautiful touching memory. You took us back there so well.

deb colarossi said...

Becky ~ this is so so beautiful. tender.

and I don't have the follower thingy no, but you can subscribe in a reader or thru email I guess?
I post on my blog twice a week or so.

Thank you for your sincere comment.

I 'm so glad we've connected .

Linda P said...

Such a beautiful memory; tenderness and security. I love the last line. I can imagine the sending out and the being there to welcome back.

GLENDA CHILDERS said...

Ah, I was blessed with a sweet mom, too. Love the chance to read some of your older posts.

Fondly,
Glenda

mermaid gallery said...

good to think about such tender moments so they never leave us......

Donna said...

Wow...takes me right back to childhood!! My mother did this for me and I will always remember and love those memories!! Thank you for a sweet thought!!